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Iron Mare Rewrite - Act II - The Red Eye HomeAct II:
“Who Are You”
“Red Eye Flight Home”
Rarity held Kili’s dead body in her forelegs, gently rocking it back and forth, her tears having long gone dry. She simply didn’t have the will to express her grief in another other way than a blank stare across the room at the rough cave walls. The world just no longer registered to her. Reality was simply too unreal. It was as if something inside of her had shattered, destroying any hope or sign of salvation that she might have had. Her only friend in this hellish place was now dead, and she was now completely and utterly alone. She was still in this shell-shocked state when she felt a paw roughly prod her.
Rarity said nothing, instead simply looking up at the large diamond dog with a blank expression. The diamond dog simply poked her again, this time with a balled fist, sending her crumpling to the floor like a house of cards. Next thing she knew, she wa
X-Questrians: First Class-Act I-01-Innocence LostAct I:
“In the Beginning”
The Village of Prospekt, South Griffinheim Empire, April, 1964:
“Mama! Look what I can do!” the bright yellow colt said, eagerly running up to the orange coated mare who was busy tilling the garden. Floating beside him, seemingly weightless, was a small metal screw that he had found in the garden dirt. His mother turned to look, taking a moment to wipe some of the sweat off her brow.
“Carrot what is...” she trailed off at the sight of the floating screw, her eyes widening slightly. “Carrot what are you doing?”
Carrot simply beamed. “This Mama!” he then floated the screw around his hoof, a large smile on his face as his mother watched with surprise evident on her face.
“Carrot how are you doing that?” she asked, unable to believe the sight of the screw floating around as if a unicorn were levitating it.
“I’m magic Ma
Soar - Act III - 17 - The Calm Before the StormAct III:
“Hammer of the Gods”
“The Calm Before the Storm”
Trixie trotted up to the entrance to the Bifrost. Still hanging over the entrance way was the tremendous cocoon that contained the unconscious form of her aunt. Trixie gave it a brief glance, wondering if she should recast the sleeping spell lest it wear off.
“No…” she murmured. “It’ll last long enough for what I need.”
Trixie continued into the Bifrost, hefting Gungnir into the air and rather unceremoniously slamming it into the specially designed hole. The massive series of gears, cogs and machinery below roared to life, grinding and groaning as a blinding beam of pure white light erupted from the staff, a complicated spider-web of energy sprouting forth. Trixie quickly began to scan the shimmering tendrils, before her eyes locked onto the bright green glowing dot representing Hekkerheim.
“There we are,” she whispered, til
Soar - Act III - 16 - Hammer to FallAct III:
“Hammer of the Gods”
“Hammer to Fall”
Rainbow Dash made her way out of the construction sight, with Scootaloo, Spitfire and the Others following close behind.
“Rainbow what’s going on?” Scootaloo asked, running up along side Rainbow, looking up at the taller pony with concern.
“I must take you home right now. I’m afraid your lessons must wait.”
“But why? What’s going on?” Scootaloo insisted, trying to keep up with Rainbow’s increasing speed. “And why do I have to go home? Why can’t I stay with you?”
“I fear there are forces influencing my sister that will only bring danger to you. I’m sorry but where I go, you can’t follow.” Rainbow replied, her brow furrowed and voice worrisome.
“Where are you going and why won’t you tell me what’s going on?” Scootaloo pleaded, “I’m not a little filly.&
Soar - Act III - 15 - I See the Bad Moon Risin'Act III:
“Hammer of the Gods”:
“I See the Bad Moon Rising”
Luna silently pulled her sword out of the center of the Bifrost and slipped the blade into its sheath. Her eyes were already affixed on Midgard and she could see that Spitfire and her friends had landed safely at the exact location where Rainbow had been deposited. She was about to attune her ears on Midgard when another sound, the heavy footfalls of a large animal caught her attention. It was coming from behind her, which was odd, considering that most creatures of the size to produce such a sound only lived on such inhospital realms as Hellaheim or Drakespire.
She turned towards the direction of the sound, her sharp eyes spotting what seemed like a massive wolf running towards her. Luna’s eyes widened in realization when she spotted a familiar blue unicorn seated on the back of the wolf, her jaw tightening as she pulled out her sword again as the wolf raced down the
Iron Mare Revised - Act I - 07 - There is a SeasonAct I:
“Charade You Are”
For Everything a Season
Rarity practically leapt out of bed, her eyes bolting open as she belted out a banshee like shriek of panicked terror.
“Ms. Belle, are you alright?” came Kili’s concerned voice and Rarity turned to see him sitting across from her, apparently having been reading a book. Rarity took several, gasping breaths, looking around the room and regaining her bearings. She was still in the cave, the nightmare having evaporated from view. Finally regaining her composure, she answered the question.
“I’m alright…” she said, more to comfort herself then to answer Kili’s question. Kili raised eyebrow.
“Are you sure you're alright? You look terrified,” he said, getting up from the cot he was sitting on and walking over to sit at the end of hers. Rarity simply nodded, waving a hoof dismissively as she sat up.
“It just a dream Kili...a really intense
To Boldly Go - Act I - 04 - All the Little ThingsAct I:
“The Shape of Things to Come”
“All The Little Things”
Twilight nibbled her lip slightly in spite of her best efforts to the contrary as the family spacecraft prepared to drop out of warp. She looked over towards her mother who was sleeping soundly, as she normally did on longer trips. Her father busied himself with reading something on his holopad, most likely a news article or the latest philosophical paper. Twilight took a breath, quickly reminding herself of why she was here.
Relax. It’s just a simple trip to the Academy, where I shall enroll and study. No worries. I’ll most likely be able to find a nice dormitory or some other lodging during my stay. No worries. It’s the start of a new Academy year there, so rest assured I won’t be the only new student. Just remember to keep a level head and all will be well.
She was brought back to reality by the characteristic shifting of weight any spacecra
Flutterhulk - Epilogue - Happiness...I'm GladEpilogue:
“So Marshall, that’s the whole story as far as you know it?” The short blond earth pony asked, eyeing her with suspicion. Next to him stood a much taller unicorn with a brown coat and a darker brown mane. The unicorn held a notepad in his magic, jotting down whatever Hoofcuff’s responses were.
Hoofcuff let out a tired sigh, shifting slightly and pulling the shock blanket a little tighter around her body. “I’ve already told you at least five times that yes, that’s the whole story Agent Winchester.”
“I see” The earth pony nodded, turning to look at the unicorn. “Well Sammy, do ya believe her?”
The unicorn shrugged. “Yeah Dean I do. I mean she’s been nothing but honest to her own mistakes the entire time. Not like Iron WIll…”
“Wait… You talked to General Iron Will already?” Hoofcuff asked, raising an eyebrow. T
Flutterhulk - Act III - 18 - A Journey's EndAct III:
Naqoyqatsi (Life as War)
A Journey’s End...
“Dr. Cheerilee answer the question. Is that blood sample from Fluttershy?” the interrogator asked, holding a notepad aloft in her magic. Cheerilee sighed, rubbing her artificial leg.
“I already told you three times, yes. I don’t see why asking the same question three times is going to change the answer.” She looked over the interrogator’s shoulder to see a snow white pegasus stallion hovering around the laboratory equipment, occasionally picking up a random pipette to inspect it. Cheerilee let out a frustrated sigh. “Excuse me sir, but can you please stay away from that! It’s very sensitive equipment and I don’t want anything to break!” she called out, and the interrogator raised an eyebrow.
“What did you plan to do with the sample Dr. Cheerilee? What’s the laboratory equipment for?” she asked, diverting Cheerilee
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